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“ Loss of Concentration”

Loss of concentration in a volleyball game while still in elementary school is one of the biggest failures I have ever experienced. Eight years ago when I was in grade 5, after the end of semester exams are always held inter- school sporting events. The first day of the match, the volleyball team of my school match with elementary school’s volleyball team from another village, at that time it all goes well without any errors during the match.

The next day is the same, me and my friends are trying to show a good game. Thanks to the efforts of other friends that I could play well in the next game as well. As a captain, I should have tried to be better than the others, because there are all the responsibility of the captain. Strive to continue to without complaining it should be done in order to play better in every game. While in the last game, me and my friends trying to play quietly and trying to give a good game so we can win against a volleyball team from elementary school that has always been our rivals in every volleyball match. Before the game I was trying to calm down in order not to panic and nervous against them. To be honest, they are not an easy opponent for me and my friends. We have the considerable differences, both in ability and height. Despite that, we always managed to get a good result against them, even though we have not won against them once, but can hold them with a balanced outcome is always the best effort we gave and did.

But at that time, we lost. And that we can defeat was purely a mistake that I did when the game in the second half. The previous value can be balanced, but the time of entry into the middle of the second half, I did a very fatal mistake, which resulted in a defeat for my school for the first time. Although there is no one who scold or blame me, but still, my school team lost in the final match due to an error that I did. I should be able to concentrate under any circumstances, but I just lost concentration at crucial moments.

Because of that mistake, my school lost the game, as a captain I should have been responsible for it. Since then, I resigned from the team, and no longer participate in the game. Lose concentration during a match is very disappointing, both for myself or for the others. No matter how the game is being undertaken, should not lose concentration. That's the thing that I regretted till this day.

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Underline        : Climax

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